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@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ process: rhetors mis-diagnose the root causes of the problem, propose incredible
 solutions, and mis-identify their audience.
 
 First, green rhetoric mis-diagnoses the problem. Many rhetors imply that the
-root cause of green evils is the combined choices, and particularly the
-consumption choices, of all the world's individuals.
+root cause of green evils is the aggregated consumption choices of all the
+world's individuals.
 
 So, when Christiana Figueres, a leading architect of the 2015 Paris Agreement,
 wrote to the general public on the problems and solutions to climate change,