From 0e914dfee88bddae7eef941fd7f5752829409a36 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joe Carstairs Date: Mon, 3 Aug 2026 16:56:45 +0100 Subject: chp1: minor rewording --- chapter1.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) (limited to 'chapter1.md') diff --git a/chapter1.md b/chapter1.md index fa214c8..90b3e72 100644 --- a/chapter1.md +++ b/chapter1.md @@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ process: rhetors mis-diagnose the root causes of the problem, propose incredible solutions, and mis-identify their audience. First, green rhetoric mis-diagnoses the problem. Many rhetors imply that the -root cause of green evils is the combined choices, and particularly the -consumption choices, of all the world's individuals. +root cause of green evils is the aggregated consumption choices of all the +world's individuals. So, when Christiana Figueres, a leading architect of the 2015 Paris Agreement, wrote to the general public on the problems and solutions to climate change, -- cgit v1.2.3