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diff --git a/chapter1.md b/chapter1.md index fa214c8..90b3e72 100644 --- a/chapter1.md +++ b/chapter1.md @@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ process: rhetors mis-diagnose the root causes of the problem, propose incredible solutions, and mis-identify their audience. First, green rhetoric mis-diagnoses the problem. Many rhetors imply that the -root cause of green evils is the combined choices, and particularly the -consumption choices, of all the world's individuals. +root cause of green evils is the aggregated consumption choices of all the +world's individuals. So, when Christiana Figueres, a leading architect of the 2015 Paris Agreement, wrote to the general public on the problems and solutions to climate change, |