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@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ they may receive green apocalypticism very differently to people who don't have
 such outlooks. My analysis is significantly weaker for having largely ignored
 millenialist people.
 
-What I do claim, is that, contra the many critics of apocalypticism, and
+Granted these caveats, I claim, contra the many critics of apocalypticism, and
 despite the fact that apocalypticism, like all good things, can and is twisted
 to evil ends, green rhetors must draw on John's apocalyptic rhetorical strategies.