chp5: reword millenialist regret

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@@ -33,8 +33,10 @@ have I proposed any practical plan of action which could lead green rhetors to
 change their literary style in the ways I prefer. I have also mostly assumed
 that green rhetoric is only addressed to people who do not hold millenialist
 worldviews, and this is of course untrue. Many people with a huge stake in green
-issues, from the Appalachians to the Congo, hold millenialist worldviews. My
-analysis is significantly weaker for having largely ignored these people.
+issues, from the Appalachians to the Congo, hold millenialist worldviews, and
+they may receive green apocalypticism very differently to people who don't have
+such outlooks. My analysis is significantly weaker for having largely ignored
+millenialist people.
 
 What I do claim, is that, contra the many critics of apocalypticism, and
 despite the fact that apocalypticism, like all good things, can and is twisted