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 ## Introduction
 
-My thesis is that green rhetoric must be apocalyptic as modelled by the biblical
-Apocalypse of John.
+My thesis is that, in order to succeed, green rhetoric must be apocalyptic as
+modelled by the biblical Apocalypse of John.
 
 While the word 'rhetoric' is often used to suggest empty or untrustworthy
 political speech, my sense is much broader than this. By 'rhetoric', I mean an