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authorJoe Carstairs <me@joeac.net>2026-08-04 14:15:38 +0100
committerJoe Carstairs <me@joeac.net>2026-08-04 14:15:38 +0100
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chp4: cut Green New Deal refces
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@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ rhetors must have unscientific visions instead. John faced a similar challenge,
and likewise adopted a minority epistemology -- an eschatological vision -- in
order to convince his audience that the good fight was worth fighting.
-Many advocates of the Green New Deal concept show how eschatological speculation
+Many green rhetors are already demonstrating how eschatological speculation
can work rhetorically even within strictly secular limits, including the
self-branded eco-socialist scholar and activist, Max Ajl:
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ self-branded eco-socialist scholar and activist, Max Ajl:
> fishponds, which receive all kinds of manure, fattening up their inhabitants.
> \[_…etc ad nauseam_\] [@ajl-gnd, p. 117]
-Ajl, as with many other Green New Deal activists, recognises that having and
+Ajl recognises that having and
sharing the right utopian vision plays an essential role in bringing about
transformative political change. While acknowledging that real political change
involves defeats and compromises as well as victories, he lambasts what he sees